雅思自学考出4个7是如何拿到的？
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- 作为曾经自学考出4个7，移民澳洲并且一直勉强用英语从事咨询工作的人（废话真多），我也来分享一下雅思口语的一些经验，希望对大家有点帮助：
先来第一部分：关于考生个人问题的问答
从我以前帮人辅导雅思的经验来看，大家常常在回答第一部分问题的时候是这样的：
Q1: What is your hobby?
A1: I like cooking. (because) I like to create new dishes.
这个答案是不是回答了问题？是的。那这个答案好不好？不好，在我过往经验来看，这就是个典型5，6分的答案。
那么这个答案哪里不好？咱们一点一点说：
1. 句型单一
I do, I like, 作为致力于考7分或以上的人，这个应该都看得出来。
2. 用词很生硬，存在用中文解释英文的情况，或者说用中文思考英文的情况
create new dishes是可以的，但是这么说就感觉你真的是在发明创造新菜。你以为你就是想表达下做点新菜，其实英语是母语的人可能已经开始脑补你是个超级大厨了吧。
3. 缺乏感情，简单的陈述事实。
说个hobby都没有个hobby的样子，根本看不出你有很喜欢这个东西，一点都不一颗赛艇。你说我还能跟你说啥，你才能把情绪调动起来？
4. 把自己置于一个潜在的不利的境地
这么回答问题，其实给了一个非常凶险的情况，因为你结束的不彻底，别人很容易会自然的接一句 "That's great. What kind of dishes have you created?" 想想都觉得这个问题实在是太难回答了。
那么吐槽完了之后，有什么办法可以改进呢？ 办法肯定是有很多种的，也不是所有人都适用某一种方法。
针对第一部分，我的建议是：答案中请加入具体的事件（并且/或者）加入自己的情感。
比如说同样的问题
情怀派的答案
Q1: What is your hobby?
A2：Cooking is my hobby. I must admit I am a person who often gets bored easily. But I have never been bored about cooking, not for a second.
有情感了，你的英语就是跟人交流的语言，你的语言就有了情绪。注意我这里没有说任何实实在在的烹饪的东西，完全就是说情怀。注意这个高级的地方在于，三句话，第二句先让步，第三句再扣题。
实践派的答案
Q1：What is your hobby?
A3：Cooking is my hobby. Last week I brought pancakes to the office and shared with my workmates. My friends could not believe that these pancakes were created by me and they all think I am very talented.
实践派强调例子，一个好的例子是具体的，而且有头有尾，如果这个例子缺少任何一句话就会显得不完整。
当然你完全可以既情感又实践派，不过针对雅思问题，尤其是第一部分，时间是有限的。一般的要点就是回答包括三句话比较好。
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回头补充说下第一部分，很多人说第一部分不重要或者相比第二部分第三部分来说不重要。我对于这样的观点是坚决反对的。我认为第一部分说得好，对考生来说非常重要，因为：
1。 第一部分是关于你自己的，你回答这个都不积极，还指望你积极回答什么问题啊。
2。 第一部份能迅速让你和考官进入与人聊天的状态，是一个非常重要的热身阶段。
好了，现在说到【第二部分】，
我想雅思口语拿到7分以下的朋友，基本上说第二部分的时候，尤其是拿到催命小卡片的时候，脑子里都会嘀咕，"我怎么说满二分钟？"
我就想跟大家分享一个英语演讲的重要技巧 － 做演讲，一定要有introduction，contents and conclusion，一定要有结构。有了结构，你就可以轻松自如地说够2分钟。
我随便在网上搜了一个真题
Describe a place that features water.
You should say:
Where the place is
What kinds of features this place has
What you can enjoy in this place
And explain why you think this place is special.
那么好了，你现在有一分钟时间准备。我会在准备过程中写下以下key notes：
1。Intro － Sydney Darling Harbour， Water
2。Q1：location － Sydney CBD
3。Q2：features － fireworks，food services
4。Q3：What to enjoy － food，companion， relax
5。Q4： Why special － （past tense）－ good memory with firends 「小技巧，在纸条上写好自己在这一段要用的时态，能够有效提醒你使用正确的时态，至少对我来说是这样」
6。Conclusion
当你写好这6个点（intro和conclusion各一点，4个Questions每个一点），你现在看看是不是说2分钟非常的容易了，我觉得你可能更多会担心自己会不会说超过2分钟而被考官打断。
回答这个问题，就说到intro的意义了。Intro的主要意义就在于，告诉听者自己想要讲的是什么，有哪几个点。这个意义的潜台词是给听者一个剧情概括，这样当你只讲到第三个问题的时候，考官因为你在intro的时候被事先告知你还有第四个问题和conclusion没有说，他就更不容易打断你，而选择继续听。
相反的，如果你没有严谨的结构，没有intro，考官根本不知道你有没有说完，他会更加容易地打断你。另外，非常重要，在任何presentation中，都不要假设考官或者听众知道你的故事结构。在雅思中，就是你不要以为考官在听你说话的时候是看过你的卡片的。
那么对于7分来说，并不需要你像8分那样需要特别华丽地开场，你需要的应该一个比较严谨的开场：
「Intro」Today I am more than happy to share this special place, Sydney Darling Habour, which I am pretty sure has a lot of water. During my speech, I would like to present this place's location, features and what you can do there and why I think this place is special.
中间四个问题，注意每个各一段，段与段之间有停顿或者连词或者总起句来表明你要说下一个点了。
「Q1」Now I would like to give you a brief idea about its location. You know Sydney has many bays and harbours. What makes this darling harbour so popular? It is because it is actually part of Sydney CBD. Based on my calculation, it is about 10mins walking from Sydney QVB or Central Railway.
[Q2] Apart from the location, you may ask what features it have? I would say that it possibly has the best food, a beautiful firework on every Saturday. In addition, you also have a chance to enjoy the beautiful sunshine and the harbour with Australian beer.
[Q3] In terms of what to enjoy, for me the answer is that you can escape from busy Sydney's workdays and enjoy every bit of the weekend with someone you like or love with a delicious food and drink.
[Q4] The reason I like this place a lot is that I have several good memories. I can easily remember every time I laughed, walked, danced along with my friends there. That's the place I like most in Sydney.
演讲没有结尾就是不完整的。不同于写作，口语的结尾通常就是
[Conclusion] I do recommend you to visit Sydney Darling Harbour. I am pretty sure you will have a good memory there if you have not had one yet. Thank you.
大家可以看到我的演讲有几个重要的地方：
1 因为具体所以真实可信让人感同身受：与其说那个地方多么beautiful多么relaxing多么enjoyable，你不如说那地方air is fresh，food is delicious，beer，sunshine，laughs这些非常具体的词。
2 口语其实也是有模版的，用用apart from，in terms of， the reason I like is等等，都能有效帮助你强化整个演讲的节奏和结构感。
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评论区有知友询问说人的卡片要怎么说？那我搜一个题：
Describe one of your neighbours
- When did you become neighbours?
- Do you often meet?
- State whether your neighbour is a good one?
这个题目确实看起来还是很头疼，但是切记，当你拿到卡片的时候，一定不要再脑海里浪费很多时间，重要的是赶紧开始写notes（例如）：
1. Intro - Neighbour - John
2. Q1: when - DID - 2012 summer - feeling [我又标注了DID，用来在说的时候提醒自己这一段是过去式]
3. Q2: Often meet? How? What? - every Saturay - driving lessons - feeling
4. Q3: Good neighbour? - yes - good example to follow - feeling
5.Conclusion - appreciation
这个题我觉得陷阱就在于三个问点都是完全可以用一句话来说的。那么这种时候，你想要回答得出彩，用一些不一样的表达，怎么办？单纯回答问题肯定是不行的。要点在于加入引申的事情或者感受。
例如
[Intro] Good afternoon, today I am happy to introduce my neighbour John who I also appreciate very much as a friend to you. I would like to share with you when we became neighbour, how often we meet and I am going to convince you that he is such a good neighbour.
[Q1] Now let's start with the time. I remember it was 2012 Summer that I first moved to my current apartment. My neighbour John saw me lifting small furniture and packages and he instantly offered me a hand. You understand that relocating can be frustrating. What he offered that day not only made it easier but also offered me such a friendship.
[Q2] Since 2012 that summer, we often hang out during the weekend. The new activity we recently have is an one on one driving lesson with John's car. I have to admit that John is such a good teacher that he makes "push the accelerator", "brake", "turn on the indicators" very easier to follow and not scary at all.
[Q3] So far I hope I have convinced you that he is such a good neighbour who are always there to help. Apparently, it is not everyday you will meet someone who are willing to use his own car and take his own Saturday morning to teach a bad driver like me how to drive!
[Conclusion] Finally, I really appreciate I have John as my neighbour. I can easily go on and on talking about what he has helped me. Thank you.
我觉得如果加上feeling就会让你好说很多。有了feeling， 你会更容易使用不同的句法，能够说的更多。这就好像在知乎上，带有情感的语言和故事往往比硬邦邦的干货更吸引人。
【第三部分】
回头看第一部分是问你的个人情况，第二部分是让你讲自己的一些经历和感受，第三部分是让你对现实中的一些现象的看法。
对于这一部分，我觉得就是不管遇到什么问题，强迫自己至少说两个点。其实我个人会把雅思写作里面的句型作为模板用在回答第三部分的问题
举例来说
Q1： Should women stay at home or go out to look for jobs?
A1: I do believe and support the idea that women need to go out to work. One of the main reasons is that I believe we all as human beings need to have our career development and this obviously requires people to go out to look for jobs. In addition, I believe staying at home is not a good option for women because women cannot make a good income by doing only housework. Quite frankly, better income often means more money to spend on enjoyment and that's what we all are looking for.
就是遇到这种问题，先想着自己一定要说两点，用词也可以像写作一样用一些复杂的词。两个观点句用不同的句型来说。
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刚刚看完《奇葩说》真是看得很high，回头再继续聊聊雅思口语，今天想到了一个我的雅思口语实战利器跟大家分享：
刻意逼自己变化句型，能逼你真正展示你的英语水平。
如果你一直用I do, you do, he/she does, 一直用I am, you are, he/she is，你自己都会讲到无聊了吧。就好像别人问你how are you？ 你永远说的都是I am fine. 我觉得真正好的英语，应该就是不要偷懒只使用你觉得特别顺手的句型，你要想着挑战自己。
例如你可以做一个游戏，下面不管你问我什么，我都要用一个who的从句来回答你这个。
例如
Q1 How are you?
A2：Fine as always. (because) I am that kind of person who enjoys everyday at work.
例如
Q2 What do you think about governments should spend more money on education? A2 to be honest, I am not a big fan who believes it is government job to spend more on people's education.
再比如你可以说，下面不管你要说什么，我都一定不会用我或者任何一个疑问句原文中有的名词作为主语：
例如
Q3 How are you?
A3 - It could be worse but hopefully it will get better soon. / It has been a good day so far for me.
例如
Q4 What do you think about governments invest on travelling to Mars?
A4 From my perspective of view, investing on things such as travelling to other planets is not a waste of money.
（你说这些回答的句子，你考过6分，6.5分的水平肯定都会，是不是？但是因为你从来没有逼自己这么说，所以你根本在考试那个高压状态下，你更不可能说出来。）
现在我们把这个游戏扩展到雅思口语里面，其实就是你自己给你自己设置一个小模板，在回答问题的时候强制自己一定要用到某个从句，一定要用到某个句型，一定要更换主语，我觉得你试了之后，多试几次，就会发现自己其实还是会相当多不同的表达方式的。
很多人包括我自己，如果真的让我自己从我会的句型里面挑，我会忽然选择困难，大脑空白，呼吸不畅。但是我如果自己告诉自己我下面这个问题一定会用某几个具体的句型，我觉得一下子容易很多，思路也会变得清晰。
（过百赞，谢谢大家，这个收藏数是赞数的两倍，我不得其解。。。。）
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看到有很多人收藏，希望大家能有一些具体的收获，然后实实在在在自己的口语中用出来。
再来随便聊聊点不那么系统的口语心得：
1. It would be better if you tend to use English to explain/describe things which you would like to say but you cannot find a simple word to describe.
比如你不会说或者想不起 aggressive 这个词，你不要满脑子想着完了，侵略性还有别的词代替吗，不要这样，你要想着用英语解释, 例如你本来想说谁谁谁开车特别冲，你想说that person's driving style is very aggressive.
然后你想不起aggressive怎么说，你就可以简单地解释下，I don't like his driving style. What he normally does on the road is that he will challenge every single yellow light he has met and he will challenge every single person who dare to drive faster than him. He is simply lucky that he has not been involved in a car accident yet. But I do think it is a matter of time.
再比如你想不起awkward，你本来想说这是一个很尴尬的经历，但是你就是想不起来尴尬怎么说。你应该想办法用你已知的英语来解释这个词，比如this is such a moment that I simply didn't know what to do and what to say. My brain was working so hard but not a single word could come out of my mouth.
英语不是辩论，不需要你给出严谨的定义，但是作为一个要拿口语7分的人，用已有词汇和句型去解释英语，是必须有的能力。
另外我个人觉得联系如何用英语解释英语，会让你不得不大量使用从句，从而帮助你丰富你的句型，非常有效。平时可以做一些这样的练习, 向自己或者别人解释一个新学的词。
2. Be specific or your English is powerless.
比如当你说到这是一个非常非常小的概率，你大概第一时间会想说this is such a small chance. 如果你口语词汇好点，你可能会说this is such a tiny little chance. 但是我觉得如果你能说出this chance is as tiny as winning a lotto. 或者你直接用英文整句来说，This is such a small chance. I don't think I could repeat what happened that day even if I give another thousand times trying.
以前我最爱的美剧《House M.D.》有一个很经典的台词，他面对一个犹豫是否要接受治疗的病人，他是这么说的：
如果你接受了我的治疗，你的生存概率就像是奥尼尔的上篮一样了。
但是如果你不接受我的治疗，你的生存概率就像是奥尼尔罚球一样了。
这就是具体的力量.
3. Body language is very important. Eye contact is a must.
英语的对话中对于直视对方的眼睛，以及肢体语言都是有要求的。雅思只要是人做考官，那么就永远拜托不了人的因素，那么眼神，肢体动作都是非常重要。实际上英语很多时候都是I don't care about what you say but I do care how you deliver it.
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