雅思写作备考，今天环球雅思小编给大家带来：雅思写作：雅思作文批改——科普类
这次小编给大家发一下一些雅思作文的学生成文还有老师的修改，希望大家从修改的地方能提醒自己注意一些关于雅思写作语法和表达上的问题。今次介绍的是科普类的雅思写作以及批改。
题目：博物馆的功能
Some people believe museums are for
education of the youth. However, others believe that it should provide
something interesting and entertaining in those public places. Discuss
both sides and give your own opinion.
学生原文加批改：
In the traditional ideas, museums are regarded as an educational places for students, while some people argue that museums can be used as entertainment entertaining places recently. In my opinion, museums play both roles in modern society.
Obviously, museums are places which that
collect a large number of valuable stuffs of art, culture, and nature.
It is an ideal classroom where people can receive practical education
without books. Students obtain not only the visual enjoyment but also the knowledge of certain subjects, when they are visiting museums during the museum trips. In addition, the sense of teamwork or and grouping is enhanced by museum visiting, because children visit museum in organised groups organised by schools. Classmates or schoolmates share their opinions and ideas in and after their visiting museums.
However, besides the educational function, museums enrich people’s life. Firstly, with the increase of attracting and entertaining activities, museums enable youth and adults to relax at in the
weekends. Secondly, all forms of entertainment stimulate the enthusiasm
of study and relieve the pressure. Some cultural and historical museums
offer cultural games to visitors, which are very popular and draw a lot
of attention of from
people. It is easy for students to remember knowledge when they are
playing this kind of games. Lastly, modern museums offer a social
platform to the youth, especially those who are interested in the same field. Actually, the various exhibitions in museums enhances interaction and communication.
As mentioned about, personally
museums have educational and entertaining functions in modern society.
The combination of education and entertainment can bring more profits
for museums and this it is beneficial for visitors.
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